KyleRoberts's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wade Fulp: RGF]

Hell Yeah...

This is going to be great when you finish! Obviously you needs some punch and kick noises in there somewhere.
A suggestion would be to add some sort of a Panic attack that you can only use once or twice per level. An example that comes to mind right away is that Zeebarf/Tom Fulp Disordery game, where you can jump kick to knock everyone down. Ever play Streets of Rage for Sega Genesis? That's another good example...
The controls are a little awkward, but understandable since you're making it a two player game. I just don't like having the movement controls and attack controls so close together.

Looks badass...once this is done, it will definitely make front page. You should have both Fulp brothers in there and give it a Double Dragon theme!

[Pendekar 0.8b]

Yeah C'MON!!!!!

Nice. Very Nice. Keep up the good work!

You gave this entry a 5, raising its score to 4.01!
If this game is protected you will get a PROTECTION point!

[Taking out the trash]

Kinda fun!

I like the wind resistance factor...made the game interesting! You should try creating a basketball game like horse or something. Maybe a golf game.

[Creature Creator V1]

I like this!

Much better than one of the billion dressup games people submit here. You should continue to develop this; add backgrounds and things like that.

vonDark responds:

Yep, I will make V2 much better

[Handguns]

okaaaaaaaay.....

....now what do you do with it? Looks interesting so far, but there's not much here. Still, I can't say this is BAD, so I did protect it.

[Mediocre Newbie Tutorial]

I agree with the last guy...

...there seems to be a bunch of this type of Flash appearing...NG needs to make the help section a little more prominent.

Pilot-Doofy responds:

Thanks man. I'm glad you appreciated it. I think they should make a collection for tutorials like they did for the clock, lock, drugs, and other "collection" submissions.

[Give Me Liberty]

Nice Job!

I didn't play the whole thing, but I definitely liked what I saw. As others have said, you definitely nailed down the feel of GTA3...even though Vice City is better, I still played the shit out of some GTA3...*misty eyed*
Anyway, I would learn some more actionscript if I were you and try to make this a little more interactive than point and click. HOWEVER, I know from personal experience that doing so can be frustrating, so try to add some more 1st person shooting elements in the game; I'm sure you could do that fairly easy and it doesn't take a lot of code.
It's obvious that you put quite a bit of work into this; the illustrations are great! Just work on the experience a little more...maybe structure this like a Choose Your Own Adventure story or something. This is all just constructive criticism...don't give up on this game quite yet. The more you can hold NG user's interest, the better chances you'll have of making the front page!

Krackers responds:

Yeah I've been working on the action script for quite some time now, but this game has been in the works so long that I decided to just submit it by the end of March. So I did. Don't worry, next time I'll make better use of good 'ol action script. And I'll incorperate more 1st person shooter stuff too. Thanks for the helpful review.

[Pet The Sentinel v2]

Cool!

I want a pet sentinel...where can I get one? :)

[NG ranks/levels handbook]

Not bad!

I do appreciate the work you put into this...nevertheless, it's not like this Flash was really great visually or had lots of interactivity. But, on a good note, I feel like Tom and Wade Fulp should take note of these instructional Flash movies that talk about points and experience and either use yours or create a really good one for the site. I gave you 3/5 b/c it was very informative.

Pilot-Doofy responds:

Thanks, I emailed liljim about my tutorials and stuff, I'm still waiting on a response.

[Cartoon P.O.F]

Not bad....not great

You have the "engine", but spruce up everything in general. Not bad though, gave you 3/5. That's generous, considering you had no sound at all. And what's up with the instructions section???? The readibility on that was awful...damn logo covered up a lot of the text. Try to fix that. But you're on the right track overall.