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Nice Job!

I didn't play the whole thing, but I definitely liked what I saw. As others have said, you definitely nailed down the feel of GTA3...even though Vice City is better, I still played the shit out of some GTA3...*misty eyed*
Anyway, I would learn some more actionscript if I were you and try to make this a little more interactive than point and click. HOWEVER, I know from personal experience that doing so can be frustrating, so try to add some more 1st person shooting elements in the game; I'm sure you could do that fairly easy and it doesn't take a lot of code.
It's obvious that you put quite a bit of work into this; the illustrations are great! Just work on the experience a little more...maybe structure this like a Choose Your Own Adventure story or something. This is all just constructive criticism...don't give up on this game quite yet. The more you can hold NG user's interest, the better chances you'll have of making the front page!

Krackers responds:

Yeah I've been working on the action script for quite some time now, but this game has been in the works so long that I decided to just submit it by the end of March. So I did. Don't worry, next time I'll make better use of good 'ol action script. And I'll incorperate more 1st person shooter stuff too. Thanks for the helpful review.

Cool!

I want a pet sentinel...where can I get one? :)

Not bad!

I do appreciate the work you put into this...nevertheless, it's not like this Flash was really great visually or had lots of interactivity. But, on a good note, I feel like Tom and Wade Fulp should take note of these instructional Flash movies that talk about points and experience and either use yours or create a really good one for the site. I gave you 3/5 b/c it was very informative.

Pilot-Doofy responds:

Thanks, I emailed liljim about my tutorials and stuff, I'm still waiting on a response.

Not bad....not great

You have the "engine", but spruce up everything in general. Not bad though, gave you 3/5. That's generous, considering you had no sound at all. And what's up with the instructions section???? The readibility on that was awful...damn logo covered up a lot of the text. Try to fix that. But you're on the right track overall.

Your intentions are good...but...

First of all, the sound is SOOOOOO annoying! It starts over after every click! Good God, get rid of it!
There IS something to be said about the need for explaining the NG points system if the site isn't doing a good job of teaching people. But this wasn't the prettiest way.

Pilot-Doofy responds:

Thanks, sort of, I guess. Oh well, fuck off. :-)

Cool!

This could be awesome....I didn't have a second player to play with but I got the point! It would be cool if the combat system was a little more developed; maybe give this game a Super Smash Brothers feel. That would give it an interesting twist, for the goal wouldn't be to kill the other player, just get the gold! I really like this, neat idea...but keep adding to it.

This is kinda cool!

Very Interesting...I like the atmosphere. I would change the way the text looks on the screen. Around the edges it's a little hard to read b/c the background gets in the way. Where did you get the music from? Sounds like some sort of remix...I heard the Trigun guitar riff thrown in there...pretty cool!

VirulentShuriken responds:

Thx!! to the top left corner there is a little speaker icon, hover the mouse on it to see the music credits.

I don't have to understand it....

it still shows that you put some time into it, and that's all I care about! Interesting....

Pretty damn good!

This is really good. One nit picky thing...even though we can't really use any of the magic yet, the menu is really hard to read because you've got it slightly translucent and the background bleeds with the text. That pretty much goes for everything...all the text is hard to read. But other than that, this shit looks pretty badass. Don't make us wait for this too long before its done, you could get an award! I gave you a 5/5.

Keep going...

Do more with this and you can get a better score. So far so good...but it's still not much.

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