KyleRoberts's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario Gear DEMO]

Hey, this is cool!

I like this, it has so much potential! I like the fusion of two really popular games like this. Kinda surprised nobody's thought of this before. But that's the way good ideas usually are.

Get a better developed version together and I will vote higher...like you said, this is a demo, so I can't really give you much. But I really like what you've done so far! Keep it up!

[Maganic Wars v2.01]

Hell Yeah! Nice Job!

Definitely a Magic The Gathering feel! This is pretty cool! Nice actionscripting, too! Are all the cards random or is there some sort of array of cards that each player gets, like their own deck? I'm curious as to how you created this....let me know if you can...

Maguas responds:

There are two arrays of 5 cards, one for each player. The chances of getting a good card are the same for you and the opponent and the same in all levels. The difference between levels is that on levels 0 and 1 the opponent chooses randomly between his 5 cards then the card he chosed is replaced by another random card. On upper levels apart form the rising of life and the new cards, the opponent now chooses the card he is going to play wisely ;) , there is an IA quite refined, enough to make higher levels quite difficult if the opp. gets good cards.
Another aspect is that the 5 cards you see on your side are each of them a complete deck so I only have to turn visible the card chosen. Thanks a lot for your review and I hope I've helped you.

[Super Mario Quiz]

Cool! I really liked this!

Something was waaaay screwy with the sound though. And you need to fix your buttons...go into Flash tweak the hit states or something. Somehow you have to get it just right before the buttons will work. It might have to do with the fact that your custom cursor is getting in the way of the actual button you're trying to press...I've had a similar problem.

Just some suggestions. Nice job overall though.

[Random Randomsman]

A good start but it's still a start

It looks like you have the making of a good fighting game, but you really need to work on the graphics and sound, which I'm sure you realize. I really don't get the blob-like enemies that move towards you and then turn into normal human bodies when they die...what's up with that? And the enemies don't even attack you, so what's the point, you're always going to win?
Make it look pretty, and maybe add some powerups or other features and add some sound. It just doesn't look finished. But like I said, it's a good start.

wallpaperman responds:

THANKYOU MATE, if you want the finished version watch "swordsman 5: the game"

[Wade Fulp: RGF]

Hell Yeah...

This is going to be great when you finish! Obviously you needs some punch and kick noises in there somewhere.
A suggestion would be to add some sort of a Panic attack that you can only use once or twice per level. An example that comes to mind right away is that Zeebarf/Tom Fulp Disordery game, where you can jump kick to knock everyone down. Ever play Streets of Rage for Sega Genesis? That's another good example...
The controls are a little awkward, but understandable since you're making it a two player game. I just don't like having the movement controls and attack controls so close together.

Looks badass...once this is done, it will definitely make front page. You should have both Fulp brothers in there and give it a Double Dragon theme!

[Pendekar 0.8b]

Yeah C'MON!!!!!

Nice. Very Nice. Keep up the good work!

You gave this entry a 5, raising its score to 4.01!
If this game is protected you will get a PROTECTION point!

[Taking out the trash]

Kinda fun!

I like the wind resistance factor...made the game interesting! You should try creating a basketball game like horse or something. Maybe a golf game.

[Creature Creator V1]

I like this!

Much better than one of the billion dressup games people submit here. You should continue to develop this; add backgrounds and things like that.

vonDark responds:

Yep, I will make V2 much better

[Handguns]

okaaaaaaaay.....

....now what do you do with it? Looks interesting so far, but there's not much here. Still, I can't say this is BAD, so I did protect it.

[Mediocre Newbie Tutorial]

I agree with the last guy...

...there seems to be a bunch of this type of Flash appearing...NG needs to make the help section a little more prominent.

Pilot-Doofy responds:

Thanks man. I'm glad you appreciated it. I think they should make a collection for tutorials like they did for the clock, lock, drugs, and other "collection" submissions.